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Thoughts fall out before the head explodes!

Monday, October 03, 2005


How I Loved Her

How I Loved Her

How I loved Rita--
Then lost her fast.

She said, "In love?
You're self centered.
Your -ME- factor permeates."

I tried to tell her how wrong that was...
She had no right.
(I was screaming at the back of a head.)

Those bags got packed;
Reply cut deep,
"Of course you are.
You are a poet--aren't you?"

-posted by Nobius 5:42 AM #
Comments: "
the last stanza is perfect. I like this piece very much.
 
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Wow...thanks James...that's quite a compliment! Especially coming from someone as talented as you.
 
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